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This was a request by an anon.

I have gone through many things both new and old to make this. Now the only question... Is it good? What about the character can be better? (I know my backgrounds fail, so let's look at the point of interest).

Any small details were part of the request. Red sore stomach and implying to the whole chaos apple thing.
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Mood: Joy ~andynortonuk Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I think the overall composition of this piece is good.
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~alwaysExpanded Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would say right off the bat that I really like how her hair turned out and the overall color / shadow is done well. I think her legs do look a little thin, but that might just be the comparison with her belly. The skirt has some awkward folds, the one in front and then the one in the back, and feels like it needs some detailing (like with shadows) to make them flow into the garment more. The way her bosom and belly hang is very organic and really conveys the feeling of weight, well done.
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*TheNeverWere Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought the legs were too thick, and I'm not sure how to fix the garment because it looks fine in my eyes
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~alwaysExpanded Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, totally opposite ideas. I did have to think a long time to find any critiques for this one so it makes sense that they don't stand on very firm legs. Ultimately it is well composed and shows your continued growth as an artist.
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*TheNeverWere Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Granted, I do need more work with clothes. It's hard to find the proper guides and references, but it's something to work on.
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~First-Second Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
CHAOSSSSSSSS.

Eris is awesome, always good to see more of her!
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*TheNeverWere Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed! But I'm just going to... sit over here... and be lazy.
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